Wednesday, January 5, 2011

Evaluation of Projects

1. Kayla Thaller/Kelsey Eagan. Comic strip

I felt that their comic strip conveys the message pretty well. It clearly shows that the pigs had the control over all of the animals even from the first picture. Although it only shows one aspect of the book, it is a very large and very important one. Overall, well done.

2. Daniel.
-Drawing

I think that this picture is great! Rather than it being all about the animals its nice to see something that shows the books biggest parallel, the Russian Revolution. Replacing the animals heads with major people dealing with the Russian Revolution showed the resemblance between the two and was very clever. Nice job Daniel.

3. Emily
-Drawing

Emily's parallels show a lot about the book's meaning. Showing the different levels and how they compare between the people and animals really paints the picture for you. It also shows that there is always a leader. Swell job Emz.

4.Levi
-Movie

This movie was SO good. Levi did an extraordinary job on the script and conveyed the characters well. Quality was 100% as well as completeness. Way to go.

5.Annie
-Movie

This movie represented the animals well and shows what went down in the book. I loved how she used real animals and took the time to give us that effect. Very well done.

6. Sidney
-Poem

I really love this poem and it obviously had a lot of time put into it. It tells the reader step by step what happened but in a fun way because it is a poem. It shows that Sidney understood the book and would be helpful for someone who didn't have such a good grasp. Nicely done.


7. Angela
Pyramid/Artwork


I think that this was a great way to represent the book's meaning. It clearly shows that there were different levels and greed rose to the top. It relates our society and the book well by comparing and contrasting the animals and humans. Great job.


8. Hailey
-Poem


This poem was something that was nicely done. It has all of the key elements to tell the story. It looks like a lot of time and effort was put into it and you can tell. This is great. Nice!


9. Dan
-Comic strip


Dan's comic strip shows the major parts of the book such as corruption of power and use of speech. Way to go, this was nicely done.


10.Kylie
-Drawing/artwork


Showing the seven commandments really showed what the animals were trying to do. The crown on the pig's head in the picture is very clever. Well done.

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