My body paragraph (on pursuit of pleasure) hasn't changed from what you saw on Friday. I made slight alterations in word choice so that it would be so repetitive, mainly synonyms for "deception". I have found that world coming up A LOT in our paper as a whole but also in my separate paragraph. KELSEY, Kylie and I have not seen your body paragraph! This would be super helpful for you to post so that we know how it ties in and what/who you are writing about.If you could post it or email it to me that would be great. Kylie, you said you weren't going to be in class on Monday so would it be possible for you to post/email me your body paragraph? So Kesley and I can put the paper together even though you won't be there.
If we have all of that we should be fine, we do have our introduction but we still haven't finished our conclusion!
We should try and finish it through the blog so that we at least have the majority of it complete!
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